A Child’s Story: First Update The Story So Far with Credits
Published by This is the first update of your universal Child’s Story written by members of Triond. I have left the instructions that describe how you can add to the story at the top of the article. The updated story and the credits are at the bottom of the page.
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On June 22, 2012 at 9:36 am
I like it interesting
On June 22, 2012 at 10:08 am
Great idea Steve, here goes….
The oasis was tranquil and peaceful, the water was perfectly still as they ran towards the oasis, palm trees were scattered randomly around the water’s edge.
A lone figure was across the other side of the oasis, it was Vicky the vulture. She was quietly perched in one of the palm trees, trying to keep cool from the scorching hot sun.
Chris from Cyprus, (Brit by nature though!). Thank you Steve.
Best Wishes, Chris.
On June 22, 2012 at 2:33 pm
Gertrude and Jack ran between the palm trees and jumped into the cool water splashing and taking great long drinks. Gertrude’s hat fell off as she reached over to get it she spyed
a vulture sitting in a palm tree she said to “Jack See the bird, I hope its friendly” just then the vulture spoke saying,” Hi I’m Vicky
Hot out isn’t it !”
Lauralu Ontario Canada
On June 23, 2012 at 12:23 am
Although Vicky sounded most friendly, she harbored evil intentions. She knew these two young hippos were very innocent and she wanted to take advantage of them.
I’m in Pennsylvania, USA. Thanks for the fun.
On June 23, 2012 at 5:53 pm
Vicky flew down from the palm tree and perched on Gertrude’s hat.
Vicky exclaimed, “Oh you two must be very hungry! Come with me to my home, and I will prepare a wonderful feast for you!”
On June 23, 2012 at 5:54 pm
Whoops. Molly Girl, USA, Chicago, Illinois.