Sweet Solar System!

The solar system has a great life-giving star, the Sun that the nine planets* revolve.

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Sun is the brightest star,
That roams the sky so far!
Sharing the light and heat,
Running without the feet!
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Mercury’s close to sun,
Too much heat is no fun,
It’s quickest to revolve,
But it does not evolve!
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Venus, smaller than earth,
Considering the girth;
Earth and Venus are twins,
But don’t have equal spins!
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Earth is a deep blue sphere,
Where life thrives without fear,
It holds water that feeds,
To cater to life’s needs!
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The fourth planet is Mars,
So red like distant stars!
Seen in sky, dusk and dawn!
It is red in its tone!
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Jupiter is so large,
Other planets cannot barge!
With this huge gentle giant,
Having patterns, rampant!
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Saturn has many rings,
May use them when he sings;
The orange floating sphere,
Plays skipping everywhere!
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Uranus is ice giant,
As it has gas variant!
This is a frozen ball,
With methane clouds et al!
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Eighth planet is Neptune,
Spinning in deep blue tone,
Since ocean is so blue,
Poseidon’s Neptune too!
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Pluto may be a dwarf,
He needs a huge scarf!
May catch cold and could cough!
As from sun, he’s far off!
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Solar System is here,
Which changes forever!
Meteors visits from far;
And collide to form scar!
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Inside Milky Way jar,
Like ropes tied with a car;
Planets revolve Sun-star,
In orbits in thin air!
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* Scientists may disagree with the number, but it is quite impossible to imagine a Solar System, without the tiny dwarf Pluto patrolling the external boundaries!

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  1. erwinkennythomas Says...

    On September 13, 2012 at 7:38 pm

    wonderful read


  2. SharifaMcFarlane Says...

    On September 13, 2012 at 8:15 pm

    This would help children to learn ;-)


  3. Eunike Says...

    On September 13, 2012 at 10:55 pm

    Nice to read this


  4. Raj the Tora Says...

    On September 14, 2012 at 12:11 am

    Thanks a lot friends


  5. futurelife Says...

    On September 19, 2012 at 7:35 am

    I like your article.


  6. Tiki33 Says...

    On September 28, 2012 at 12:56 am

    Wonderfully done!


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